Instructional learning

This morning the Tui class had to write a Instructional piece of writing of how to tie your shoe.

This piece of writing had to be Specific

To make it Specific you would need.

1.use your left and right strategy

2. be Specific in your writing and what you mean

3.make changes if you need to if it didn't work

all these ideas would help you if you were doing a Instructional writing.

Yesterday's Instructional writing Aliens VS  Monsters!!!!!

Yesterday Mrs Cutler got us in to buddies. Then she said one of your buddy has to go on each side of the room. I was on the left side of the room Mrs Cutler graped the left side of the room no one had know idea what we were doing one side was doing Alines and the other was doing Monsters. How to write this is in 4 or 3 easy steps
1.tell them you have to use colour 
2. Do they have to use shapes
3.Make your writing Specific
4. don't talk to the other side or tell them what you are doing.

A Moment in time

                                          

I heard rocks dropping at the edge of the mountain and a hawk flying

I saw children in front of me and the bouncing of backpacks

I felt like weight was hanging on to me and I was going to slip

I wonder how far there is to go and what would happen NEXT!....